Example

DRAFT 2: Extended

Early one morning while I was swimming around searching for my next meal, I saw a peculiar looking fish. It looked like a fish, but it had the trunk of an elephant. The elephant fish blew bubbles out of its trunk and swam past me. I quickly followed the fish to a dark cave. My mouth started to salivate as I licked my lips. He was all mine! Suddenly, the elephant fish turned around. I noticed there was an octopus in its mouth. He let go of the small, juicy octopus and gave it to me. Octopi are my favorite treat, so I decided to eat it instead. I figured I should share the snack with my new friend. We have been best friends ever since.